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Kozmic Blues II

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Mixed media on watercolor paper

Image size
1025x1284px 1.12 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 600D
Shutter Speed
1/25 second
Aperture
F/6.3
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Aug 31, 2014, 5:48:19 PM
Sensor Size
4mm
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

It's great how you used different contrasts in this work. Although the most ouststanding contrast are the colors – warm and cold, red and green/blue) i also like how you worked with organic and geometric forms. And last but not least the texture of the different materials you used. It gives your work a great dynamic.

The only thing I can criticize is the hair on the left side. Especially in comparison with the little part of hair on the right side and the face it has few details. I would like it with more dateils even though the work has an unfinished style. Or maybe a few more shadows would also help, cause for me it's kinda distracting. Every time I look at the face, my eyes wonder to the light part of the hair.

In generall i have to say it's awesome how you work with different medias. They fit togehter so perfect here. One thing you moght try in your next work is that maybe a bit more of the watercolor is running down (but these is my personal liking).